nealdoran on "Ad feature: Guys! Recover your lost youth with new L’Oreal...
Here in the L’Oreal for Men laboratories, we know how it is, you’ve been around the block a few times, have a perfect family and your career is going great -- even if it isn’t quite what you planned...
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Well-written, great gags, with a sparkle of originality. Could maybe do with a better punchline, but 5* anyway.
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So that's how you do it - what about 'pubeaway'
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Laughing my fluffy bits off, Babs.
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Thanks all and hello again. Where have I been Des? Long story, but basically I took a wrong turn trying to get into new Writers' Room, and ended up in far off places seeing some things a woman's not...
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Oh, and I think you're right about the end Malgor, I thought it needed to end on a you're worth it line, and that was the best I could manage, .The only other post catchphrase disclaimer I had was:...
View ArticleDes Custard on "Ad feature: Guys! Recover your lost youth with new L’Oreal...
Thanks Neal, although I still preferred the old days, man, but you just gotta make compromises to get on. Anyway, it's a bit boring: no initiation ceremonies, no club magazine, no loyalty scheme, no...
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Maybe the clue to the punchline is in the title, but slightly amended to '...rekindle your lost youth', with a punchline something along the lines:Want to win back your lost youth? A little grooming...
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Ooh, now I do like that. My only reservation would be it kind of suggests ageing men with unruly eyebrows and ample nose hair should be on some kind of Offenders list. And I don't think that's quite...
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Like it.Neal's back. (Presumably he's been on some overseas telecoms junket)
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